I like it
but the hand is positioned like a grope and it seems awkward. It would look better if, say, it was positioned around her mid-section holding her to him, or resting on her shoulder.
also the squigly lines are off at the bottom, you know, the ones that are supposed to be body shading. Just ditch them if you can, its mainly awkward because it looks wrong, but also because there's no other visible shading in the picture.
other then that I like it, I tried to find a third thing but I couldn't. I was gonna say her arm was off to, but its positioned around her heart, which would kinda makes sense. Very stylish, keep up the good work!