SirCannabisClock's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Royal Fulps]

honestly if I was tom fulp

I'd think I was pretentious if I included this

beastkid7 responds:

I see what you mean. But he doesn't judge the calander submissions ...I don't think anywaz.

[Invertido]

I like it

but the hand is positioned like a grope and it seems awkward. It would look better if, say, it was positioned around her mid-section holding her to him, or resting on her shoulder.

also the squigly lines are off at the bottom, you know, the ones that are supposed to be body shading. Just ditch them if you can, its mainly awkward because it looks wrong, but also because there's no other visible shading in the picture.

other then that I like it, I tried to find a third thing but I couldn't. I was gonna say her arm was off to, but its positioned around her heart, which would kinda makes sense. Very stylish, keep up the good work!

iter-intergalactic responds:

Hahaha
I realized in that of the hand and found it extremely hilarious

I didnt wanted to move their hands because it was very difficult with the mouse
but i`ll improve that in the next drawing

Thank you very much for the good critique
its highly appreciated

Cheers !

[Sky Is the Limit]

not feeling it man

I just don't like it, and trust me I decided that before I read your comments.

Maybe it's because there's too much white area, I dunno I can't put my finger on it.

InfernoX880 responds:

At the very least you're honest, so long as you're not a shit scorning me for the way the art came about more so than the way it looks.

The truth is lately I've been experimenting with all the filters I have and such, I wanted to try putting in some new stuff rather than simple geometric patterns with different colors. As far as this goes...well, it's pretty new to me, but hopefully you'll like my future work a bit more =)

[-FA Q-]

hmm

it's kinda like a freshman Marcus Fenix

JKAmovies responds:

Ah yes. . . Very much so^^

Thanks.

[Azura Story Ver.]

OMG

ITS LIKE SONIXC THE HEDGEHOG EXCEPT HE'S THE WHITE ONE THAT I CAN'T REMEMBER THE NAME TO YOU KNOW THE ONE THATS LIKE A COSMIC SUPERVILLIAN OR WHATEVER ALSO ROBOFURRIES LOL

SYRSA responds:

You're funny.

[Katana Girl]

rate cool man

but I feel the legs are off, too short. The right hip seems a bit off too, but I can't name it.

Revoltingfriendship responds:

It's more her pose being awkward than the anatomy being horribly off, aside from the head, which is a couple of sizes too big. Thank you

[Beach babe]

criticism

criticisms:
arms are terrible, most notably around the shoulders. work on that.
the waterfall seems to hit the rock and vanish into thin air
the lines inside the stomach are off, not to mention the entire stomach
lastly cut the sleazy shit: the people looking for that garbage are gonna hate it since you're not that skilled anyways.

CompactTricks responds:

Well thanks for being a complete douche bag.... at least you told me about the arms.... the waterfall is going behind the rock that she is on... i understand i didn't do to good on that..... and its not sleazy.... do you see her with no clothes on rubbing her pussy... no.

[Cast of Adult Swim]

hey uh

I have bad news sir: oblongs, though I forget exactly where, started on another channel.

KrustyJuggler responds:

noooooooooooo! oh well. hope you like the drawing anyway.

[Moe Neko +Commission+ Ver 2]

too much saturation

it's burning my eyes

suwako responds:

it is? D:

sorry, my computer has a terrible monitor and my stuff always looks different on other people's computers, so I can never tell when something looks wrong.
I'll try and tone it down, then re-upload it. Thanks for telling me!

[1......]

hey

the green guy doesn't look like squidward

d-z responds:

lol that's an interesting way of looking at it. i drew this for no reason at all, nor did i have any idea what it meant, nor did i have any feelings to express in this, nor did i have any point somewhere in it. i wanted to see what people make of it. it's my favourite work so far. like i've achieved oneness with Nothing and i just drew this. the thought tracks on this isn't obvious. there's a billion zillion ways to look at it. it's perfectly unhumorous, it's perfectly undramatic, unskillfull, it's a blank piece. it's like a blank piece. you do not really see what's there. you try to give it some meaning but there just isn't. it's stuck up work. it's gray. it's empty. it's the oddest thing i have made without having to look odd. it's stealthy. if i was someone else i'd buy this perfect work of meta art. and display this in a museum of cultural transitions. this is the best. i love it so much. thanks for the review.